Peer Review 7/27

This peer review was definitely different because of the kind of essay we were writing so we had to edit in a different way. I'm still improving on my editing skills but I think (and hope) that I was able to help Eric with his paper. I feel like I gave him a lot of comments that were pretty helpful. Eric helped me a lot too. He pointed out a lot of places where I could add more description and pointed out some awkward points and I think they helped my essay a lot. It was helpful to hear his feedback and I was glad to see that he understood what my purpose is.